Thursday, July 22, 2010

The Endless Death Of Chrissie Watkins



I’ve seen goldfish swimming in a big tank
at a library not far from my home.
I’ve stood with a woman I know looking

and the fish sometimes looked back, their eyes blank.
Somewhere in the spaces—the quantum foam—
between the fish I’ve seen monsters lurking.


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Seeing a monster isn’t the real trick.
The tricky bit comes after you’ve seen one.
Monsters appear, disappear and they’re done.
But the brain stays numb, heart frozen, soul sick.




Goldfish And Sea Monsters #1 of 3

Goldfish And Sea Monsters #2 of 3

Goldfish And Sea Monsters #3 of 3

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Let’s Go To The Library And Scare Ourselves

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Broken Windows From A Day In The Life






Of the various suburban libraries around these parts, about twenty of the libraries stock DVD’s of the movie “Jaws.”

Today I wanted to re-read the original novel by Peter Benchley and it was pretty hard to find. Of all the libraries using our local catalogue system only about ten stock the novel.

[ Sighs ]

As luck would have it, the only library near me that stocked the novel was a very pleasant small library I’ve written about quite a few times. It’s the only library I’ve ever visited that has an aquarium so, I guess, it’s fitting that they’d carry one of the most famous modern books ever written about a big fish.


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Of the nine billion changes Steven Spielberg and his writers made adapting the novel “Jaws” into the movie, they made the fewest changes to the opening death of Chrissie Watkins.

(In the novel her first name is specified as “Christine.” I’ve written before about a movie that begins with the death of a woman named “Christine.” In that case the woman’s killer was named “Roman.” [ Coughs ] )


I’ve always hated the business of the shark eating Chrissie Watkins. I hated the scene both in the movie and the book.


I was fourteen years old when I read the book and saw the movie. I already knew I wanted to be a writer and I already knew that scenes like that “signaled” a great deal about the narrative to come, and functioned as much more than just “shock value” or as a “grabber.”

As a superficial for instance, film critic James Rose would write of the death of Chrissie Watkins:


We do not see a graphic depiction of the shark’s attack in the opening sequence of Steven Spielberg’s Jaws. Instead the viewer sees images that are far more terrifying. First Chrissie Watkins confused then panicked face, as she is momentarily pulled underwater. She is then dragged thorough the sea, screaming 'God help me. God help me.' The shark releases her and she takes hold of a waterline marker, its bell ringing out her death toll. The viewer can just hear Chrissie say 'God it hurts. It hurts.' The shark attacks again and again it thrashes her body back and forth. Her final scream 'God please help me' is in vain as the shark pulls her beneath the waves.

Chrissie Watkins death is simply the beginning, functioning like most, if not all, horror film prologues: simultaneously announcing the arrival of the narrative’s threat and visually demonstrating the ferocity of its attack.

... Beneath the surface of Jaws lies a narrative that is not just about a Great White shark but one about the myth of the Great White male: three different men pitting themselves against the unknown. To enable them to do this, women can have only a limited narrative function. Through their loss or their reduction to the status of victim, they enable the male(s) to fulfill their role as protector not just of the individual or the community, but for us all.


“AN EXAMINATION INTO THE DEATH OF CHRISTINE WATKINS,” James Rose




In the novel, writer Peter Benchley includes a bit of dialogue that sums up Chrissie Watkins from the point-of-view of the characters in the novel. And it telegraphs something of the way Peter Benchley thinks of her character. And it shapes—for the duration of the reading—how readers are, at least, asked to think of her character. This is Vaughan, the mayor, who has just convinced Brody, the police chief, not to close the beaches after Chrissie Watkins has been found, the obvious victim of a shark attack:


“We do have one thing going for us. Miss Watkins was a nobody. She was a drifter. No family, no close friends. She said she had hitchhiked East from Idaho. So she won’t be missed.”



The novel “Jaws” came out in 1974 and the film was released the following year.

Even as a character the fictive construct “Chrissie Watkins” was not a “nobody” who “won’t be missed.”


But as a social construct the concept of certain people as nobodies who won't be missed is very much alive.


It is alive both as a sad political reality visible in the decisions made by politicians and businessmen, and as an even sadder ethical reality visible in how many people think of themselves.


I strongly suspect both “Jaws” the novel construct and “Jaws” the movie construct are bigger and more deadly monsters than the ‘great’ white shark they feature.











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The Mind’s Ocean Redux



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Sharks In Shoes
















1 comment:

eotness said...

Hated the scene myself, both versions. For the reasons you gave (well, save for maybe the James Rose reference. I felt the guy might have been slightly out to lunch regarding the "Great White Male" comment), and also because, quite frankly, it and ESPECIALLY the film version inspired WAY. TOO. MANY artwork featuring girls getting eaten by sharks while swimming, with it generally being even worse in that, unlike Chrissie where for all intents and purposes her death was ultimately on her for swimming at night, the girls in question didn't even have any choice but to be in the water due to being forced in there by another threat with no realistic chance at survival. Case in point: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/57642418 Tina got thrown off the yacht by a Kraken, tried to swim to safety, then witnessed her best friend Lisa get crushed to death by said Kraken and while mourning got taken out by a shark that appeared behind her (and while the narration did hint she had a chance at swimming to shore, the skybox didn't have any land in sight). Did I mention that these artworks all fell under the vore category, meaning seeing them die like that was the whole POINT, and not even the hope of stopping the threat, but the end in and of itself? I hated vore, feared it in fact.

If anything, one of my own plans is writing a scenario that would outright avert her fate. Ironically, the film version actually ALLOWED for a take that allowed her to survive with some tweaking (if anything, her being eaten was left EXTREMELY implausible at best). Maybe the attack would still occur, but I'd have her survive by grabbing onto the buoy with the shark letting her be afterward then swim to shore only to pass out on the beach from her injuries (oh, and get sent to an ICU.). I'd spare her novel counterpart but... well, let's just say the fact she was bleeding out badly enough from the amputation to get nauseous and dizzy indicated she was most likely going to be a goner in a few moments even if Jaws DIDN'T bother to return to finish the job (especially when she was a yard from shore by that time, not something she can realistically pull off returning there in that state). At least the film ambiguously implied that Chrissie was still moreorless intact, albeit wounded, before the shark finished her off when she tried to get off the buoy. Oh yeah, and I'd also expand on Vaughn's comments on Chrissie by revealing she was an orphan who moved through foster homes, eventually drifted partly because of that background (she'd also be something of an avid skinnydipper even BEFORE she met Tom), and have something of an initial fatalistic view of how to wait out until "God collects his due", largely because her being moved through various foster homes didn't leave her with any real chance at developing connections with others. This would start to change once she met Tom, and if anything, her near death by that shark would have inspired her to actually LAY roots down, develop connections. She'd also end up deciding to become a shark researcher due to that experience.